As seductive as
a glance can be
mesmerized as
the moment seems...
flustered concentration
beams...
Chemical balances
going upstream
imagining that moment
freed...
Anticipation preys
on me
as captivation
heats the seams
With just a glance
you've taken me.
Love this one. It rhymes yet is hip with a great message. Nice style.
ReplyDeleteJoanne,
ReplyDeleteYour the Best! It is so nice having you visit, you not only understand my poetry, but you like it! Thank you.
bessye
In a word, seductive in its simplicity. Rgds, Ivan
ReplyDeleteThanks Ivan, always a pleasure having you visit..you've been missed.
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